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William, Your cover page looks great. Just don't forget to add "5th Grade Anthology" in the titles. You may print it in color after you finish your About the Author. Mrs. B.


 * 1st person: William, this is an example of 3rd person limited, not 1st person. **
 * Bill and Bob went to "Barns & noble". Bill loves to read all types of books. He can't wait to get a new book to read so he darts in and heads to his favorite type of book section.He wanted a sertin book because he read the rest of the seires.**

​ William, When you use "I, me, my, myself" it's the 1st person. This is an example of 1st person, IF you delete the first sentence about Bill and Bob.
 * 3rd person (limited)**
 * Bill and Bob went to "Barns & noble". I love to read and I like allot of books. I was raceing around the store looking for diffrent books.**


 * 3rd person (omnichent) ( omniscient) - This is correct! Yeah! **
 * Bill and Bob went to "Barns & noble". Bill really likes to read but Bob isn't a big fan of reading. Bill was runing every were looking at every book but Bob on the other hand was just siting by the door.

O.K. now I get it I just got them mixed up.**

​I pick my hero, homework, narritive storys to go in my antholigy.

Hi

Vivid verbs Darted Ran I darted out of the house to escape the fire.

Coolio Cool, Awsome That shert is so coolio.

William, You need to finish your diary entry before social studies class tomorrow.. Please see me tomorrow during computer time to discuss this. Thanks, Mrs. B.

**​ I'm on the oregon trail. I'm so happy that we chose the Cheyenne River Trail because it has more benifits then nonbenifits and we made peace with the indeans insted of fights. So that is one of the good things but we had some bad icownters 3 hotheads killed 1 and skalped 2 more indeans so we had to disiplin them we shoved soup in there mouths. Another is that a 2 year old girl fell out of the wagon and was ran over by a wheel from a wagon so we were down 1 person or 1 helper. We also had a radalsnake bite the guy is ok but the scorpion sting was werse but he also servived. My livstock are doing great I have anofe food to get to oregon. I am luke that none of my animals have died nore me. I heared that a wagon was bearnt to the ground by a flameing arrow and another was hit by a tree that was flowing down river and it was the same person. I saw a deer and a eagle. **
 * Dear book**

__ William, This is a good start, but you didn't finish. Please finish before social studies class. Thanks, Mrs. B. 5/4/10 __